Aku kangen mring omahku...

Jul 22, '07 11:44 PM
for everyone

Kemarilah,
biar kunikmati m e n i t i n i disampingmu
Jangan beranjak,
karena h a t i k u kan terbawa olehmu
Temani aku di beranda,
menikmati ladang padi, burung pipit dan senja sore hari

Karna a k h i r mulai dekat,
biar kukecap indah,
sebelum bulan menjemputku
menuju padang gersang kesunyian

Senja di Omah Sunyi, 22 July 2007

Tags: sajak, feeling blue

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debiyani wrote on Jul 22, '07

waaaaaaaaalllllllllaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhh ternyata... uiiiiyyyyyyyyyyyyy :-))

oetjipop wrote on Jul 22, '07

uhuyyyyy puitis bgt nihhh

3astwest wrote on Jul 23, '07

eheeemmm....ttg si ganteng itu kah ? hihihihiihi

debiyani wrote on Jul 23, '07

gooooooooosssssssssiiiip yuuuuuuuuuuk :P :P :P

mindri wrote on Jul 23, '07

Beautiful poem... In love?

ezrakarundeng wrote on Jul 23, '07

kangen deh aku padamu

awisudanto wrote on Jul 23, '07

Kok bisa ya, bikin puisi bagus2 gini. Saya sih pilih njepret aja deh ... :-)

sivea wrote on Jul 23, '07

cuit cuiiiittt. aku padamuh deh ih

eryande wrote on Jul 23, '07

(Zipora) : ehem ..ehem ....:)

cutyfruty wrote on Jul 23, '07

Iki ketemu si seksyeh lagi yo??????
Wis ayo tak kancani nang beranda. Aku yo gelem kok.....

agneswollny wrote on Jul 23, '07

ehem... *kalau aku datang, ada teh manis ?

srhida wrote on Jul 23, '07

Selamat Berjuang!

taishaluv wrote on Jul 23, '07

romantis pisan hehehe...

inimona wrote on Jul 23, '07

mbak haley mau ke padang yaaa

foodngarden wrote on Jul 23, '07

fotonya pake senja di albumku hehehe

haleygiri wrote on Jul 23, '07

debiyani said

waaaaaaaaalllllllllaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhh ternyata... uiiiiyyyyyyyyyyyyy :-))

heyyyyyyyyyyy... inget yaaaaaaaa...... :p

haleygiri wrote on Jul 23, '07

oetjipop said

uhuyyyyy puitis bgt nihhh

uhuy jugaa... sok puitis aja kok! :p

haleygiri wrote on Jul 23, '07

3astwest said

eheeemmm....ttg si ganteng itu kah ? hihihihiihi

si ganteng yg mana yaaa... banyak yg ganteng seeehhh... kikikkiki...

haleygiri wrote on Jul 23, '07

debiyani said

gooooooooosssssssssiiiip yuuuuuuuuuuk :P :P :P

emoooohhhhhhhhhhhhh....

haleygiri wrote on Jul 23, '07

mindri said

Beautiful poem... In love?

thank you... I dont think so... :p
just a blue feeling :p

haleygiri wrote on Jul 23, '07

ezrakarundeng said

kangen deh aku padamu

Uh, aku jg kangen deh *hugs*

haleygiri wrote on Jul 23, '07

awisudanto said

Kok bisa ya, bikin puisi bagus2 gini. Saya sih pilih njepret aja deh ... :-)

Duh, aku pingin bisa di dua2nya... kok gak bisa jua ya? :( Jepretan jenengan bagus2 mas...

haleygiri wrote on Jul 23, '07

eryande said

(Zipora) : ehem ..ehem ....:)

serak ya tenggorokannya mbak? ;)

haleygiri wrote on Jul 23, '07

sivea said

cuit cuiiiittt. aku padamuh deh ih

sama ver, aku padamuh jugak!!! kakakka

haleygiri wrote on Jul 23, '07

cutyfruty said

Iki ketemu si seksyeh lagi yo??????
Wis ayo tak kancani nang beranda. Aku yo gelem kok.....

si seksyeh yg mana mbak? kukukkukuk...
mbak Sri di beranda rumah sendiri aja sama mas Leo.. jangan ndesel2 aku lah... kek blum pernah muda aja... Xixixiix....

haleygiri wrote on Jul 23, '07

agneswollny said

ehem... *kalau aku datang, ada teh manis ?

pasti mbak... teh tubruk nasgitel di senja yg hening... sluurrrppp... huenakeee :D

haleygiri wrote on Jul 23, '07

srhida said

Selamat Berjuang!

MERDEKA!!!

haleygiri wrote on Jul 23, '07

taishaluv said

romantis pisan hehehe...

pisan2 romantissss.... kekekeke